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    dots Submission Name: Screwdriversdots

    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I've been drinking screwdrivers.
    And while I was at it I had the hammer and nails,
    The buckets and the pails,
    And every little knut and bolt from here
    To there and all the tacks from the living room wall,
    And the forks and spoons, I drank them all.
    I'm still going, the liquid is still flowing
    From my mouth to my heart
    To the hole in my stomach,
    And I can't keep it down, its coming back up
    The sequel won't be good enough.
    I've been drinking screwdrivers
    And hammering my heart through,
    Thinking about you, yes, you,
    And I've been scratching glass on my torn up lips
    Reading plays without the right scripts.
    Thats why the ending seems so sad,
    Its the wrong one, the one we weren't supposed to have.
    I lost it all, my lines, your lines,
    My heart and your story.
    At least you can leave and say I was never boring,
    Thank me in the end because when you start again,
    It will all seem a little bit better than before.
    And you have me to thank for it.

    Submitted on 2011-02-04 19:27:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can feel the sadness :'(
    I feel as if I AM this girl or guy, I can just feel those hard-cold sentiments.
    I love this write, it's going to my favorites <333
    | Posted on 2011-02-05 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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