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    dots Submission Name: Questions????dots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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       I just want to know

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    I long to know if I'll ever amount more than my parents,
    Or will I simply be a refurbished product of them in this life I lead?
    Will I ever become what I wish to be,
    Will all this unknowing & doubtfulness I feel now pay off in the end,
    Will I succeed or will I fail?
    How long till' I know?

    Submitted on 2011-02-04 21:16:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A very good set of questions, set in a good write.
    W are filled with these questions as we grow in life. The answers will be determined by how we make lifes choices, handle set backs and overcome obsticles we find in our path on this journey through life.
    At the age of seventy one, I still find the need to make new choices and corrections to my life.
    We are on a path all must travel, the rich, the poor, the brilliant mind or the ignorant, we all have to go through life in the best way we can.
    | Posted on 2011-04-24 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      These are questions asked by every young person.
    | Posted on 2011-04-24 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
    | Posted on 2011-04-24 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      I think we all grow into boring versions of our parents.
    | Posted on 2011-02-06 00:00:00 | by SHEslaysME | [ Reply to This ]

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