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    dots Submission Name: Struggles make us strongerdots
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    Author: TalentedChild
    ASL Info:    17
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    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsStruggles make us strongerdots
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    Hope Faith

    Love

    It's all we need but sometimes we never get enough



    Pain

    Sorrow

    Fear

    are things we all feel inside, and that we wish weren't really here



    But feelings are feelings whether there good or bad

    and life is life and sometimes we got to be sad

    Hope Faith

    Love

    It's all we need but sometimes we never get enough



    Pain

    Sorrow

    Fear

    are things we all feel inside, and that we wish weren't really here


    But Sometimes we got to feel pain to let us get by

    Sometimes we got to let it out even if it means to cry



    Sometimes life's hard times are what makes us strong

    Sometimes we got to give our love to receive it and remove the pain,

    Sometimes we got to wait for the rainbow, before we see the rain.





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