The Melody by MelodyPoet1997

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Submission Name: The Melody dots

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Author:	MelodyPoet1997
Elite Ratio:	1.62 - 0/0/1
Words:	67

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
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Bytes:	497

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Melody from hellopoetry.com scam

The Melody dots

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It's repeating itself
Over and over.
It's ringing again and again
What a nice little tune it carries
It's so beautiful.
I'm happy it's here

It's The Melody I've heard my whole life.
If anything happens it's there.
It's my little stalker.
Why it makes my life magical and musical.
But will this beautiful sound last forever?
Why this is The Melody my soul has created.

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