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    dots Submission Name: The Melodydots
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    Author: MelodyPoet1997
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       Melody from hellopoetry.com scam


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    dotsThe Melodydots
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    It's repeating itself
    Over and over.
    It's ringing again and again
    What a nice little tune it carries
    It's so beautiful.
    I'm happy it's here

    It's The Melody I've heard my whole life.
    If anything happens it's there.
    It's my little stalker.
    Why it makes my life magical and musical.
    But will this beautiful sound last forever?
    Why this is The Melody my soul has created.




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