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    dots Submission Name: Novelty Actsdots

    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/122
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    A Burning Bush -
    clever idea at the time
    But come on, I got a space heater does that -
    Curly coils thin as hairs glow all night

    Prophets had the inside track on all your plans -
    But we'll get it from the weathergirl
    You made the magi think a magic star
    Led them in the right direction; now there's GPS
    We're making our own babies, too
    And titanium limbs better than bone
    Disembodied finger - handwriting on the wall
    You've got a knack for the dramatic
    But a text message would suffice
    Weighed in balance. Found wanting.

    But we don't hold it against you. It's all good.
    What I'm trying to say is
    We've got this.

    Submitted on 2011-02-06 18:51:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      so, couple of thoughts that come up...

    the other day i was thinking about cell phones. and the thought came to me that someone could know where i am at all times. kinda scared me, that. like some twisted 1984 in 2011. but, i could be monitored. i could.

    i was reading an article today about how kids speak in text. speak in text!!! like all of a sudden language has taken a different turn and has become abbreviated. instead of - i love you... it's ILY. like c u mom - ily.

    i swear, i am so lost when it comes to this stuff. having just gotten my first cell phone this summer. i can't imagine what it must be like for parents and keeping up with their kids.

    sheesh. my friend's 5 year old can navigate the [censored] phone better than i. seriously.

    anyhoo... not sure if any of these things fit with what you were getting at...

    about as unbiased as i can be. (smile).
    | Posted on 2011-02-09 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      You wish. :)

    Of course we understand
    the fine print, the master plan
    how to muzzle clarity with debate
    admiring angels whose voices were heard too late
    | Posted on 2011-02-06 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

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