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Men like you.

Author: TalentedChild
ASL Info:    17
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Class/Type: Poetry /Mirror or Mask
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Men like you.

You cant learn to tell the truth until you learned how to lie
and you cant learn to love till you have a heart
But men like you never start

You can't smile unless you've felt the pain
A smile like that could bring out the sun right after the rain
But men like you don't hurt

You can't give up when you won't give in
You can't start something when you don't know where
to begin
But men like you never try

You can't succeed if you don't ever fail
and you can't cure love
when the ships already sailed
But men like you give up.

You can't heal wounds, if you won't cry
You can't let go, if you won't try
You can't give up, if you want to win
You got to dream big and hold up your chin.
You got to smile to heal that pain, so that you can dance in that rain
So men like you can live.

Submitted on 2011-02-07 02:37:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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