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    dots Submission Name: My silent guardiandots
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    Author: TalentedChild
    ASL Info:    17
    Elite Ratio:    1.85 - 19/81/106
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
        beware there are things that might set someone back. IT CAN CAUSE TRIGGERS. It may be traumatizing to someone witnessing child abuse if you have. So I will put the warning up. It happens to everyone, and that was the message I want to get out to you.


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    dotsMy silent guardiandots
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    I can hear his footsteps walking down the hall
    I pretend I'm asleep and face my head near the wall
    I hold my breath and be brave as I try not to cry
    If my teddy-bear could talk he'd tell me it'd be alright
    His breath reeks of booze and I can hear his curses out-loud
    But i try and be quiet I dare not make a sound
    I kiss my teddy-bear and squeeze him with all my might
    I try not to be scared but I know if he could talk he'd say it'd be alright
    He's stepping closer as quiet as can be
    soon I can feel his enormous body towering over me
    He pulls off the sheets and pulls me on the floor
    I dare not open my eyes to see this once more.
    He starts pushing and shoving his dick into deep
    but I remember my teddy and still pretend I'm asleep.
    I try not to scream and hide my eyes so he can't see my tears
    I wish it didn't hurt so much, I wish mommy was here. But I close my eyes and try not to cry, because soon it will be over and my teddy will be by my side.




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    ||| Comments |||
      I know I agree. But the better part of it, i that the person who did this to me is away now and for life. I hardly ever think that he will get out at this rate. I don't think people in jail treat child abusers very well. I mean think about some people in jail aren't in there for as serious crimes. I also am a stronger individual, although some days I feel like crying my eyes out. Thanks for reading it! I appreciate it!
    | Posted on 2012-03-15 00:00:00 | by TalentedChild | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so incredibly sad...and what that teddy has seen...even if he has only button eyes...he would cry...

    there isn't a bad enough punishment for child abusers.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-03-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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