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    dots Submission Name: Quittingdots
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    Author: EEKS
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    Most days, I hope you've stopped reading.
    It might make you feel better when all you do is make me feel worse.
    And I have written word upon word to make sense of things but they're still a mess and I haven't even found where to begin the end.
    I'm past the point of thinking you might change your mind so I'm trying to change mine.
    You know though, you have that way of dragging me back in.
    I'm just hoping I can quit you. I really hope I can.





    Submitted on 2011-02-07 15:47:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      a long time ago i felt this way, and i could go months with out seeing him but one glimpse and i was sucked back in. it really does suck cause it makes it alot harder to get over him. things will get better with time but honestly it is a slow process
    | Posted on 2011-02-08 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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