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    dots Submission Name: conversations #35dots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsconversations #35dots
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    i'm tired

    and (the cheerleader

    is) worn out

    (looking at me)

    with sore hands (again.)

    and a heavy heart.



    (when i go home)

    it's been a long day



    (i don't want to be

    spoken to.)

    without an end

    in sight.




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