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    dots Submission Name: losing itdots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotslosing itdots
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    they said it was candy coated sugar
    but they lied to me again
    these drugs are making me fall apart
    my seams no longer hold me in
    im getting out again.

    welcome to this misery
    I sometimes like to call it my life
    the candle burns, but shows no light
    I feel better in the dark instead.

    can you dig down deep enough
    to understand what im screaming about?
    does it go in one ear, and out the other
    are you completely numb, borderline dumb
    coming undone, completely insane
    do you want to share my brain?





    Submitted on 2011-02-08 15:29:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Pretty amazing, I must say. The first part really caught my interest. Drugs, that once made life tolerable.. begin to stop working. Hard stuff to deal with.
    ~DD
    | Posted on 2011-02-28 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]
      hi this was a good post the darkside of anybody is alwaz the best as you age it only gets deeper with your edurements in life
    writing poetry is a good out to escape yout thoughts
    nice write it caould go a little deeper but short is good to

    sandman
    | Posted on 2011-02-09 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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