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    dots Submission Name: I Knowdots

    Author: Foreseer
    ASL Info:    20/F/In Love
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 156/86/23
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Written 02/07/2011.

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    dotsI Knowdots

    I Know

    I know you think I don't see,
    That I'm naive because of my age,
    But you should know that I understand.
    All the things you say and all the things you mean.
    The actions you take and the words you don't write.

    I know you think I don't understand
    Because I don't speak my mind.
    Sometimes not saying anything at all is the best choice of words.
    Will you listen even if I don't talk?
    Better yet, will you listen when I finally do?

    I know you know,
    So stop pretending I don't.
    I will fly when my wings sense the cliff.
    I will run when my heart feels the fear.
    I will sing when my body knows the rhythm.
    I will stand when my mind see the cause.
    I will because I know.
    I will never surrender.

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      its a little jumbled, but its a good over all message. i know its sometimes hard to believe in your self when others dont, but if you can still believe in your self after all that then your alot stronger then you know. good write
    | Posted on 2011-02-10 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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