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For am I a freak?

Author: Rainbear
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For am I a freak?

I am unique
For in my religion im in it alone
There is no one to share my beliefs
God,Evolution,Extraterrestrials, and Ultra-terrestrials
All have there truths and there faults
For these beliefs they call me a freak
However, who isin't a freak that dosint believe what they do
I am just unique
Crazy, heiritic, or just plain dumb
Merely Couragous, Outspoken, & unique

Submitted on 2011-02-10 21:01:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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