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    dots Submission Name: Everything... yet nothing at alldots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       Shrug I donno... just rambling


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    dotsEverything... yet nothing at alldots
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    I wish to know a life of simplicity
    A life where there are not such things as "fears"
    Tell of a place such as this
    Where only happiness and pleasure is all you experience
    How would I arrive
    To such a place?
    May I bring guest?

    I wish to learn what normalcy is
    Who can define a "normal" person
    Would I fall under this category?
    And if not, how can I?

    I long to achieve my many goals
    yet at the moment I'm experiencing such stress
    Pressure that is becoming unbearable

    Life just getting to be to much yet I'll never stop..
    Wishing, Searching, Dreaming, Fighting

    Simplicity I'll forever wish for...
    Happiness I'll forever search for...
    Normalness I'll forever dream of...
    These goals.. I'll forever fight for...




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      well i think this write very good it is blunt and straight to the point. i feel that narmalcy is over rated but on the flip side everyone wants to be normal in one way or another. it is "normal" to want to be accepted if not by society then atleast by our families and close friends. so i think in that sense everyone at somepoint is normal which i think makes it a action or a state of mind rather than just a feeling. i love the last stanza it sums up the desire to be normal to be liked and accepted for who you are as a individual. great job keep it up....Joy
    | Posted on 2011-02-20 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      news flash nobody normal, we all have some either psycological,physiological,prefeerential trait that sets us apart,we have diff genes that favor or disfavor us,prfernces that sem odd or hold less attraction for others than for us. food sex( love makin preferences,bi sex, males ,lesbians,underage,animal,the list is inexhastible), taste habits all make us unique, and diff from the next person. normalcy is a feelin , not realy a quality as we always assume
    | Posted on 2011-02-18 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]


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