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    dots Submission Name: Cupid's Arrowdots
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    Author: TalentedChild
    ASL Info:    17
    Elite Ratio:    1.85 - 19/81/106
    Words: 308
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 523
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    Bytes: 1870



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    dotsCupid's Arrowdots
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    wake up your actions

    wake up those fears

    wake up your sense of destruction

    when anger is near.


    Talk to the one you love

    don't let them get away

    even if it's just one word

    you got to do anything to make them stay.


    Wake up your hurt and listen to your heart.

    You may think it's over but it's only just the start.

    You got to eavesdrop to those voices that tell you not to give up,

    listen to your soul when you think you've had enough.

    Tell the person your thinking about just exactly how you feel, tell them about the fury inside of you, make them believe what's
    real.

    Let them tell you all there secrets

    and let them tell you yours You need to do whatever it takes to open up all the doors.

    Wake up the other side of you that tells you can't take it
    tell yourself even though it ain't easy you got to fake it till you make it

    You got to tell the one you love exactly who you are
    To show them that in a galaxy of destiny
    your that shooting star

    But promise me one thing you won't let her get away
    Promise you'll do anything to make her stay.

    Life doesn't last forever and neither does love at first sight,
    but if you don't break my promise, know that everything will be alright.

    You have to remember that the past can't be re-written
    and you only really get the life that you were given.

    Then when all i said and done, and love is finally here, then you can see
    what life really means to shed not a single tear.






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