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Why are you here,
resonating, sinking deeper?
How do you rest here,
knowing it's eating me?
My dreams leave me speechless
and guilty. You are not the one
laying next to me. It's time
to go now.
I need to feel and be. Any right that
you had to me is gone. Please
leave my pieces when you go.
Submitted on 2011-02-12 21:07:48
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and hopefully can put the pieces back together...
almost like an affair here...i shouldn't be with you but can't resist you...you are like a dream i can't keep from coming back and you are too real...
please let me sleep alone...i need to get myself back to me...
| Posted on 2011-03-12 00:00:00 | by
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i know how you feel, cause ive been there before. the need to feel whole after a breakup, usually that only happens when you do it yourself, no actually getting something from an ex. good write
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