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    dots Submission Name: Empty Dreamerdots

    Author: BestxDeceptions
    ASL Info:    22, Female, Kentucky.
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 25/66/49
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEmpty Dreamerdots

    Why are you here,
    resonating, sinking deeper?
    How do you rest here,
    knowing it's eating me?

    My dreams leave me speechless
    and guilty. You are not the one
    laying next to me. It's time
    to go now.

    I need to feel and be. Any right that
    you had to me is gone. Please
    leave my pieces when you go.
    I'm done.

    Submitted on 2011-02-12 21:07:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      and hopefully can put the pieces back together...

    almost like an affair here...i shouldn't be with you but can't resist you...you are like a dream i can't keep from coming back and you are too real...

    please let me sleep alone...i need to get myself back to me...
    | Posted on 2011-03-12 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      i know how you feel, cause ive been there before. the need to feel whole after a breakup, usually that only happens when you do it yourself, no actually getting something from an ex. good write
    | Posted on 2011-02-13 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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