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    dots Submission Name: Can't Let Godots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 590/805/389
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsCan't Let Godots
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    I am tired of you
    I have nothing left
    I gave it all you
    especially my best

    I am drained and lost
    nothing left to offer
    not even a pulse
    so why even bother

    I gave you my all
    including my soul
    now I'm bound to hell
    For reasons unknown

    I gave it all to make you smile
    With nothing left to show
    Now I die like a lonely clown
    who seems to cant let go...




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