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    dots Submission Name: don't let himdots
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    Author: tobyallen92
    ASL Info:    16 female Flatwoods, LA
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/2/4
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Misc/Them
    Total Views: 406
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       its to help all the girls see that they can be happy without having to rely on a guy


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    Don’t let him bring you down,
    the words he speaks are useless.
    Let him suffer emotionally
    as you pride yourself in what you have accomplished.
    Don’t let him bring you down
    and drown in his …own pool of self pity.
    Stand up and remind yourself
    that you are a strong woman
    that don’t need his negative tongue lashing out at a beautiful day.
    Don’t let him bring you down,
    you deserve what he never gave
    and could never give.
    Look at yourself in the mirror
    and accept the realization
    that you don’t need a man,
    not just an ordinary man
    with mounds of drama
    taller then himself.
    Believe in yourself,
    and stay true to what you deserve as an independent woman.
    Look him the eye, laugh at his words,
    don’t shed a tear, for he is not worth it.
    Make him swallow his tongue
    regret his poor decisions in his own life of remorse.
    You stand their as beautiful as you are
    and say, “I don’t need you”.
    and smile your smile,
    and walk you walk with more confidence
    than you have ever had before.





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