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Poem for St. Valentine

Author: Cayman
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Poem for St. Valentine

You ever wonder why a song is sung by a sparrow
Or why cupid yields a bow and arrow

How flowers know when to bloom
Or how the sun is brightest at noon

When a calm comes across the sea
When a soul touches one like me

When a thought flickers in the mind
Longing in hopes of what we will find

All these things just happen, like life is destined to have destiny
Just as natural as it feels to have you for eternity.

Submitted on 2011-02-14 08:24:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I think this is one of the most beautiful tributes to love. Endless love. Love that holds true expectation of forever.
| Posted on 2017-05-28 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]

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