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    dots Submission Name: Poem for St. Valentinedots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPoem for St. Valentinedots
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    You ever wonder why a song is sung by a sparrow
    Or why cupid yields a bow and arrow

    How flowers know when to bloom
    Or how the sun is brightest at noon

    When a calm comes across the sea
    When a soul touches one like me

    When a thought flickers in the mind
    Longing in hopes of what we will find

    All these things just happen, like life is destined to have destiny
    Just as natural as it feels to have you for eternity.




    Submitted on 2011-02-14 08:24:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think this is one of the most beautiful tributes to love. Endless love. Love that holds true expectation of forever.
    | Posted on 2017-05-28 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]


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