Poem for St. Valentine

Author: Cayman ASL Info:    31 Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182 /168 /72 Words: 90

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Poem for St. Valentine

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You ever wonder why a song is sung by a sparrow Or why cupid yields a bow and arrow How flowers know when to bloom Or how the sun is brightest at noon When a calm comes across the sea When a soul touches one like me When a thought flickers in the mind Longing in hopes of what we will find All these things just happen, like life is destined to have destiny Just as natural as it feels to have you for eternity.

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I think this is one of the most beautiful tributes to love. Endless love. Love that holds true expectation of forever.

| Posted on 2017-05-28 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]

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