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    dots Submission Name: What do you do?dots
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    Author: darkfeathers
    ASL Info:    19/female/beddybyeland
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 4/2/10
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 813
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1328



    Description:
       something nobody should EVER have to go through


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    dotsWhat do you do?dots
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    What do you do...
    when the man who raised you
    loved you, protected you,
    what do you do when his hands
    find themselves wrapped around your neck?
    What do you do the second time?
    What do you do when he apologizes
    and you can hear the regret,
    the guilt, and the horror?
    What do you do the second time?
    What do you do when you have to ask
    Why?
    Why would you do that, Daddy?
    What do you do when you ask
    is it worth it?
    Is it worth losing him?
    your warm loving arms, your snuggly bear,
    your stone of strenth and harbor of home..

    What do you do when you realize
    you wouldn't burden your enemy with this?

    Do you "deal" with it yourself?
    Do you kill him?
    Do you kill yourself?
    Do you die inside your silence?
    Screaming and crying and ranting
    when no one can hear
    your heart is broken.

    Or do you turn to the one thing you promised not to do?
    That thing with that rush of adrenaline,
    the glimmer and shine of a knife,
    creating a vale blood
    shielding the pain
    the eyes and amplifying
    my feelings?

    What do you do when you scared
    of your own dreams?




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