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    dots Submission Name: Goodbye, Goodbye, My Love Goodbyedots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 356
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 766
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1752



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       I'm searching for some closure. I can't keep this up, so I'm writing my farewell.


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    dotsGoodbye, Goodbye, My Love Goodbyedots
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    You tell me that you miss me, you lie straight to my face, you tell that I’m pretty, But not a thing has changed. You find a way to hurt me, when it seems that I’m not looking, but little do you know, I can see everything. Tell me why you can’t just go away, tell me why you have to play these games, tell me when I’ll forget you- please take the pain away with you. I don’t want to feel like this anymore, I don’t want to let you back in, but you always seem to find a way, then let me down some more. I hate the hold you have on me, I hate the tears I cry for you, I want to forget you ever had me, I want to delete you completely. So here I’m going to ignore you, I’m giving this a try, I’m pretty sure you won’t notice, Because the bomb chick you keep lying to me about. I’m not dumb, I’m not oblivious, I know you want her more. So stop telling me you think I’m hot, cuz this body’s not for you. If you want it, come and get it, but it doesn’t come alone. You have to want my heart and mind, and that’s something you used to own. But I won’t let you in again, I won’t trust you anymore, I’m giving up on any dream of me and you, a whole year gone to waste. So goodbye, goodbye, my love goodbye. I’m never looking back. It won’t feel right for quite a while, but I have to get away. You’ll never get it, you’ll never understand. You’ll never regret the shit you did to me, and I won’t take it anymore. So one day if you wonder where I am, if you want to know how I am, just let me tell you here and now, I’m better off with you gone. So don’t try running back, when you realize she’s not me, don’t try using your words on me, I see all you say as a lie. Goodbye, goodbye, my love- goodbye.




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      It does take a while. It's hard to not look back to not want it to work to leave it behind. I don't know how many times I made the mistake of trying again or thinking their was a change. It's sad really. But he wasn't lying you are beautiful inside and out, you shouldn't think otherwise. I have no reason to lie about that and wouldn't. Stay the way you are because your a desert flower. Rare and beautiful keep up the writing it is amazing.
    | Posted on 2011-05-01 00:00:00 | by skinnydrew | [ Reply to This ]
      Reflections of the past, knowing what you are and if he doesnt appreciate that, someone else will, even love is hard to let go but sometimes it is worth it, Before I faced a hard time in life, A ex girlfriend once told me. The hardest thing in life is letting go, Now I dont know if this helped you or anything but I wanted to give some input on this
    | Posted on 2011-02-17 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]


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