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    dots Submission Name: A half stepdots
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    Author: rubymoon
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 155/162/91
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA half stepdots
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    A step half made
    Is like a step half done
    A step that is but half a step
    …away from completion but yet
    Still half a step more than a step that is none




    Submitted on 2011-02-15 20:23:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ugh..i must have commented on this when i was in a stupor..sorry about the typos...

    such a good poem i liked much..

    but i meant "guess" and "too timid"

    glad we don't get graded on spelling for our comments...and me. the English teacher..oops..

    anyway...i quite enjoyed "A Half Step"
    sorry about the sloppy spelling in my reply.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-02-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      i half thought about commenting on this one earlier then took a half step away and came back to enjoy the other half of my perusing...

    i gues trying at all is something...but feeling to timid to go for it all can leave us wanting more and wishing we were braver...

    this reminded me a bit of "hound" by robert francis....

    how life is like that, equivocal...uncertain

    "meanwhile i take a half step back and wait the event"
    cool...halfway is better than no way...but then the glass is half empty?

    i like short writes that produce long thoughts.
    | Posted on 2011-02-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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