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    dots Submission Name: DONEdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    I will sit here helpless to life's surprises
    Sitting here with my fake smile
    numbing myself with these pills
    with this booze

    I no longer care to fight
    I no longer have that drive to prove you all wrong

    I'll sit here numbing myself from life's surprises
    No one will be the wiser,
    No one will confront me...

    Is that water Jacquelyn?
    Is that truly headache medicine?

    This would take too much effort,
    too much courage on their part...
    I am giving in,
    throwing in the towel,

    I AM DONE!!!!




    Submitted on 2011-02-17 01:56:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cant agree more with you blanksheet, here u got a preety pic of u and some guy find happyness yet? no thats life
    dont quit, i am a guy but i have being in mad scrapes health, love,finance lastly i started to down grade my self and always assume a negative thought but no one came after me,even my best friend who i will jump off a roof for did not dive to save me from negative fixations, but somewhere i realised that with a daily dose of a singular happy thought can gt u gong in the right direction then u will see that healin doesnt come from what u get but what u give. give hope Jackz,
    wish i could give something but my time is all i have got and sadly even that is not easily accessible, look around u ant feel good down there ur fillin ur lungs with dust by stayin down rise theres a fresh wind blowin, sniff, dry ur eyes and run for the joy and fun of running, recovery is a lonely road, get on it.
    | Posted on 2011-02-18 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      You are 22 years old, how can you be DONE??

    I know, I often use this as a figure of speech when I really want to communicate how frustrated or upset I am too, but I get the feeling you are serious and that's just not funny.

    But on the other hand, I can also relate. Sometimes you don't drop out of life to be rid of the people you care about, you drop out of life to see how far they will follow you down. Not necessarily in the same way as you, with the booze and pills, I mean, but you want someone to rescue you and call you back.

    Consider it a test of loyalty, if you like, but it's a rather twisted view, if you think about it. A good friend will also want to see you helping yourself, and when that doesn't happen, many things come to question.

    When it comes right down to it, you may have to be your own friend. I had to do this, because in the end I was the only friend I had. I had made sure of it by surrounding myself with people I knew didn't care about me. (At the time I wasn't aware I was doing it on purpose, or doing it at all, but now I'm not so sure.)

    Life through reckless experimentation can be interesting, but just make sure you know when you have gone far enough, have learned enough.

    Beating your head against a wall can get tiring.
    | Posted on 2011-02-17 00:00:00 | by BlankSheet | [ Reply to This ]


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