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The engagement

Author: concrete_rose
ASL Info:    31/f/nc
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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The engagement

everything moves like the river,
quick and fleeting with pebbles-
keeping safe to the bottom away from confrontation.

to be silent is the way,
to be ever watchful and understanding of the wretched,
how deep are they're consistent concerns.

lets just lie here you and i,
like easy going children on a sunday afternoon,
lets feast on these blessings for they are evaporating,
to those who dont appreciate them.

I can always count on someone around,
someone incompetent but somehow strong,
whom gave me everything i ever wanted
and who wouldn't settle for less.

Submitted on 2011-02-17 18:04:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like this, it really makes me feel like im just laying around with someone, but i feel completely safe with them, like nothing could go wrong.
| Posted on 2011-02-17 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice I like it, gave me a image of being with someone I onced loved a long time ago, pure unconditional
| Posted on 2011-02-17 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]
  I really like this, it's not a poem nor a story-it's more like thoughts.
It's pure feeling for another person, and I like that.
Good write :)
| Posted on 2011-02-17 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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