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Author: jackz
ASL Info:    24/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591 /623 /381
Words: 161
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Depressed
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I love you yet I'm not sure if i'm In Love with you.. I know very little about you.. all I want, is a family.. a family


I lye here near you as you dream,
Dream of things I am unaware of,
Possibly seeing the faces of your ex-wives I constantly am comparing myself to
I lye here as I wonder...
Do you really love as you say you do, or am I a quick fix for you?

I am reminded every day of the scars I caused myself that are now ravaging this body of mine
I dont have to be reminded that I look different than other women
I know this for a fact
I’m not perfect I know this, yet I try to be everything you want, everything you look for

I know nothing of your past life but you know all to well what I am all about
I feel as if I've got to beg and plead for details
Simple things..
Nothing too in depth
and even if it were, why should it matter?
We've been together for a year!

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