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Author: jackz
ASL Info:    24/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591 /623 /381
Words: 113
Class/Type: Rant /Depressed
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Just tired of my life and these feelings I live with everday


If I were to runaway...
I wonder where I would end up
The kind of people I'd meet
Or the friends I'd make
If I were to runaway how far could I get
til I could run no longer?
til my problems could no longer be ignored,
I long to drop it all,
I wish to leave it all behind
take my car and bag full of clothes
get on the road and drive in a direction I've never driven before...

See where I would end up at
See who would be a part of my life
See if its any better than the one I've got..

Submitted on 2011-02-22 20:58:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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