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    dots Submission Name: Runawaydots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
    Total Views: 493
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    Bytes: 615



    Description:
       Just tired of my life and these feelings I live with everday


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    dotsRunawaydots
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    If I were to runaway...
    I wonder where I would end up
    The kind of people I'd meet
    Or the friends I'd make
    If I were to runaway how far could I get
    til I could run no longer?
    til my problems could no longer be ignored,
    I long to drop it all,
    I wish to leave it all behind
    take my car and bag full of clothes
    get on the road and drive in a direction I've never driven before...

    See where I would end up at
    See who would be a part of my life
    See if its any better than the one I've got..




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