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    dots Submission Name: Gettin' Used To Itdots
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    Author: EEKS
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    I am getting used to most things, I am getting used to this idea that maybe we won't be together but I can see you from time to time. I'm getting used to working hard and feeling like sleep can't take me far enough. I'm getting used to being hungry and broken hearted. I am getting used to wondering about you and not knowing. But getting used to things is what gets me in trouble, maybe I was too used to people thinking you and I would get married someday. Too used to people thinking I was ahead. Too used to not having to try so hard. Maybe, I was just used.




    Submitted on 2011-02-23 19:41:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey good write if its true tell them go to you no
    move on and say if it doesnt kill me then it only makes me stronger
    good words to live by its lasted me 50 years lol

    good write and to the point

    sandman
    | Posted on 2011-02-24 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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