Intentionally

Author: Cordell ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A. Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592 /807 /392 Words: 108

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Intentionally

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When you leave close the door I don't want you to see me crying On the floor Everything you said before Is ringing through my head I should have done more I was so in love with you I didn't know you asked me to Be there for you Sorry baby, I didn't mean to hurt you Don't walk from me, is there anything I could.. do To bring you back to my arms Blinded by your love you see You know that you are always before me If I make a mistake Know I didn't mean to; not intentional...ly S.H.

Submitted on 2011-02-23 22:00:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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this sounds pretty personal and deep we will all have some of these moments that you do find something about yourself that you never new existed well written right from the gut good emotions sandman

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