Hi Ron.. I loved your poem " The Edge of Never".
It was so romantic and painted such a picture of yesteryear. Took us back in time and reminded us of how far we have come. Love shouldn't have boundaries. It was well written too, flowed nicely I enjoyed reading it. Could feel the love. You have a way of putting your thoughts down in verse... that i love... Desi
It's been a while since I have commented on one of your poems so I thought I would stop by and see what you've been writing about these days. A well written love poem, and one with a happy ending too! Very nicely done!
I'm normally not a fan of rhyming poems but this I kept reading this one. The syllables in the 3rd stanza seem a little off with "eternity". Also, maybe try and think of a different word so you don't use eternity twice in such a short poem.