Untitled and sadly unfinisished

Author: TheInvisible ASL Info:    22/f/The Valley of Doom Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 51 /55 /37 Words: 66

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Untitled and sadly unfinisished

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I wake up from my dreams needing you, realizing you're not there. I can't believe I sent you away. It was all for the best, now I'm regretting my decision to stay. If I'd just gone with you maybe it would've been better, but I know that there's no truth in that, because I'm the one that froze, the one who got in the way.

Submitted on 2011-02-26 03:11:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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oh! it makes me sad. dont blame yourself... for an absurd and illogical reason, i think he still loves you as much as you do. may be, on some other portal, he might be writing similar poems too. Imagine happy things! God loves you and sends his love through people as he sends his love through you to him. never give up hope, your poems tell me that you are a very bright person.

| Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]

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