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    dots Submission Name: Goddots
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    Author: Diablo Tapitio
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 85/111/62
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGoddots
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    i live benieth the shadows,
    I breath in your pain and grief,
    I walk with your skeletons,
    and I read the secrets that you keep.

    I am the image that is forever burned into your mind,
    I am the baby you abandoned and left behined.
    I am your unrelenting lust and vanity,
    I am your great cities, as they fall into the sea.

    I live above the clouds, I burn on the mountain top,
    I am your blood as the pressure starts to drop,
    I talk to your prophets, and spark all your wars,
    I am oppertunity and I am closing the door.




    Submitted on 2011-02-27 16:55:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      freaking loved it, it all flowed perfectly and just fit perfectly. amazing write!
    | Posted on 2011-02-28 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      I posted something in response to this . Same title as yours .
    | Posted on 2011-02-27 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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