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    dots Submission Name: The Return of The Pastdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 507
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    Description:
       Just some thoughts to get the mind going. Kinda of an exercise.


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    dotsThe Return of The Pastdots
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    My deepest thoughts,
    Bring back the past,
    And plays scenes of a distorted livelihood,
    So it comes with images so rough,
    That if it lasts,
    It would ultimately turn into something no good.

    Devastation at worse,
    Perhaps even tragedy,
    Nobody really knows,
    But the person upholding the agony.

    Sometimes these past images bring forth,
    Love stories,
    Beyond your eyes captivity,
    Romantic visuals of passion and desire,
    And love making with much creativity.

    The past always hunts me in mysterious ways,
    Sometimes in dreams of endless nightmares,
    Even worse in reality,
    In my own dis pare.




    Submitted on 2011-02-28 17:37:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm pretty sure we all can relate to you, I sure can, nice write 0) hope to read more...
    | Posted on 2011-03-01 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      i think the past haunts everyone, but always in different ways. good write
    | Posted on 2011-02-28 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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