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come and fade

Author: myonlysalvation
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Words: 152
Class/Type: Poetry /Childrens
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come and fade

had another dream-
just like the last-
and i just close my eyes tight
and let the pain run its coarse
beneath it's hollow pathway it's paved
through my stomach.....
and then out through eroded veins.
.Restless sleep.
and another regret to wrap in crimson fade.

just come and take him
i know i'm gonna lose him

just another dream-
so let's rehearse-
back to where i am still sifting through
the ruins
back to where i am picking out the pieces of another broken knife
another closing of the tide
ashes formed our perfect picture-
it's so hard to let go of,
the tie that binds
pick up the pieces. when you are left for dead.
it's just another piece of regret
..i get, to drownd out in crimson fade

just come and take it
i know i am going to lose it

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