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    dots Submission Name: Saviour Angeldots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 642
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 232



    Description:
       Enveloping, compassionate, secure feeling, if you will which is always there yet always not recognizable.

    Love, Peace, Joy, Grace, Faith!!!


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    dotsSaviour Angeldots
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    Saviour Angel
    way up high
    loving protection
    is ally;
    Why you are here
    I don't ask why.
    Your genuine Love
    I cannot buy;
    I forget my troubles
    and away we fly!




    Submitted on 2004-07-28 10:25:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      simple and kind. and enough suttelty to be applied to any religion when most "angels" are affiliated with christianity. don't really feel as if the opening does anything for this piece, it didn't necessarily take away from it, but it didn't taek away from it either.
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      i really enjoyed this piece; especially the pattern of the rhyme. it gave a comfortable, familiar feel to it without being all about the rhyme.
    thanks for a good read!
    | Posted on 2004-11-14 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      so innocent and full of love for God... like you know you have an ally in Him, and you don't question it, you just go on pure faith! i try to live my life that way as well. it isn't always easy, but this gave me a great start to my day today, which has me gripped in a rather uncomfortable depression. thanks for that!
    | Posted on 2004-07-28 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      i love how this is so short and sweet and too the point. yet it paints a picture in the readers minds. this proves words are a powerful thing and people can reach into the minds of others and show them what theyre thinking with few words. youve done that well.
    | Posted on 2004-10-21 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]


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