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    dots Submission Name: Drugsdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Story/Venting
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       just watched a movie.. brought me back to when I myself was an addict


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    Why is this world full of drugs ..
    Ultimately lethal to our bodies
    Killing young people's minds
    as it blackens their souls

    Your Sister, Brother, Mother, Father
    as they get involved with such poison you may be curios to ..
    Try it..
    Sell it..
    A domino effect waiting ... and wanting to happen

    As families get tangled within the insane world of drugs
    They lose sight of what once was important...
    Protecting the person that is now in harms way.
    Its now the high
    The rush
    The over whelming feeling of "false" happiness
    that becomes every addict first priority

    This I know all to well,
    An addict I once was,
    Now I live a life sober and wide eyed seeing the signs of others addiction all too often
    This saddens me




    Submitted on 2011-03-02 02:20:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I must say this poem is really good...I am very glad to hear you have over come your addiction..So many people try and go right back into it...I must say I was addicted to pain killers at one point in time and it was hard to break the habit...I have been clean for almost 3 years...And I still struggle...When life gets hard and Im feeling really depressed I am always tempted to go back but then I stop and think where I am at now and remember what it was like back then and its easy to tell myself no....Thanks for this great write!
    | Posted on 2011-03-08 00:00:00 | by Bloodlust86 | [ Reply to This ]
       Unfortunately drugs are a huge problem in this country. Especially in "lower class" regions such as in urban communities and rural areas. It's not to say that they don't affect the "higher ups" as well though. I'm glad you steered away from using. As a firefighter and EMT I see first hand what drugs do to people...and I see it often. I can look back at high school and see friends that I no longer have because of addiction or accidents related to using.
    Proud of you
    | Posted on 2011-03-02 00:00:00 | by Silencer | [ Reply to This ]


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