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    dots Submission Name: she reads Heraclitus of Ephesusdots
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    Author: trinityfinger
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    Submitted on 2011-03-02 05:58:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Detached is she but in such a wonderful way that I do not want to change her.
    | Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Leave it to a woman to think in such physical terms . Abandoning human relations as she ascends into the heavens and listening to the actual planets rather than perhaps our spiritual coalescence . Then again perhaps she listens to the other planets that have life in our cosmos and contemplates our deficiencies .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-03-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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