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    dots Submission Name: Im Sorry..dots
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    Author: kstina
    ASL Info:    23/female/Dallas TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 0/2/15
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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    dotsIm Sorry..dots
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    my smile fades as you walk out the door

    i cant pretend like i dont care anymore

    as memories begin to flood

    i fill the chill run cold through my blood

    i realize how bad i messed this up

    why couldnt i just shut up?

    letting go of all pride the pain inside revealed

    letting go of all the lies whats truly inside no longer concealed

    i really do love you no matter what i make you think

    regret filling me inside i feel my heart sink

    what do i have to do to make you see

    regret is overwhelming

    driving me crazy

    baby im sorry..

    please come back dont let me go

    forgive me please pull me close

    im sorry, i mean it! will you forgive me?

    dnt let it end like this please




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