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    dots Submission Name: I'll B Vinedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 768
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 113



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       "I am going to my own hearth stone,

    Bosomed in yon green hills alone,

    A secret n ook in a pleasant land,

    Whose groves the frolic fairies planned;

    Where arches green, the livelong day,

    Echo the blackbird's roundelay,

    And vulgar feet have never trod

    A spot that is sacred to thought and God."

    Emerson Good-Bye poem 4th stanza

    Love, Peace, Joy, Grace, Faith!!!



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    dotsI'll B Vinedots
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    Tendrils
    ahold of another,
    Reaching.....
    Ivy
    entwined of One,
    Teaching.......




    Submitted on 2004-07-28 10:32:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yeah, nice feel, nice all around. You know sometimes people "train" those vines to go where they would like them. Maybe in place of teaching, training? A double meaning.
    Sorry you've been up & down. So what was open mic like? I have a chance to do that, but I've got to drive sixty miles on a Thursday night if I want to try it, so I never do.
    | Posted on 2004-08-07 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      hey i liked this. it took me a few times of reading to get it but ight. to me this is ive teaching us how we should be with each other. well i think thats what its is and if so this was good. i dont know after thinking this way about it i get one of thous awww feelings.lol ( any ways tell me if im under standing this right / i hope i ma )
    | Posted on 2004-07-28 00:00:00 | by wretched_muse | [ Reply to This ]


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