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A Thousand Years

Author: TheInvisible
ASL Info:    22/f/The Valley of Doom
Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 51 /55 /37
Words: 44
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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A Thousand Years

A thousand years before I see you again.
You were the one to make my heart pull,
the one who loved me to stillness.
You are my dark singer,
my holiest pride.
You are lost to me,
as I am to you.

Submitted on 2011-03-03 04:47:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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um! it should be longer.
| Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
  i like the name of the poem,i'm really into names, i liked the poem...i am going through a i guess that just made sense to me even if that's not what you meant.
| Posted on 2011-03-03 00:00:00 | by myonlysalvation | [ Reply to This ]

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