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    dots Submission Name: My love...dots
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    Author: ShadowsnLights
    ASL Info:    25 f canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 71/107/66
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 477
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 403



    Description:
       :P Mixing it up with some French...
    http://translate.google.com/#
    Copy and paste this to translate! :D


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    dotsMy love...dots
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    De tout mon coeur

    Je t'aime

    A la vie qui nous attend

    Notre futur

    A chaque nuit qui passe

    S'approche

    Nos coeurs battent vite

    En unisson

    Que L'amour soit parfait

    Meme si nous ne le somme pas...




    Submitted on 2011-03-03 15:30:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      yes, the link worked and this one is perfect too.
    | Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      cant understand.... is it some other of your poem in translation.?
    | Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      Can't read French.....but i am guessing it is very good....lol....

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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