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    dots Submission Name: In Forest Deepdots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsIn Forest Deepdots
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    In forest deep beyond the dream
    A tree it stands alone
    Its said to be the only place
    Where true love can be born
    Many lovers have adorned this place
    United in their sleep
    And found the chalice of true love
    Somewhere in forest deep

    This tree could tell of many tales
    Of passion fuelled by lust
    Tales of true romantic love
    That is born on faith and trust
    All who touch the tree of love
    Will sow and they will reap
    The wanton love thats in their heart
    Somewhere in forest deep

    So if you have never been in love
    Thus your heart is longing so
    For the one thing that will make you whole
    And set your heart aglow
    If love is what your looking for
    To cherish and to keep
    Then go and find the tree of love
    Somewhere in forest deep





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      Very good Frank, excitingly so,
    is there really a tree for lovers, aplace where love can grow.

    Show me the way, but not for me, I have my own true love, but for those lost in the wild,
    'tis they who need to know.
    | Posted on 2011-04-17 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      I havent read many of your poems lately, I really dont know why, because I always love to read your poems. Another lovely one here indeed. It just rolls right off your tongue and gives you that warm and fuzzy feeling that a good love poem does. You are a true romantic at heart, and I always enjoy reading your poems. Another great one here, and I love the photo you have added with it!
    | Posted on 2011-03-22 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      This is wonderful! There are many fantacies that the human heart envisions in the ether of our thoughts and dreams; the fountain of youth, the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, etc. And, a most desired thing is true love; we wonder if it really exists!

    A tree of love! a living majestic forest god that can grant that most desired wish would take its place among the utmost in human desires and fantacy! To touch the tree and be assured of true love, and not have to be pained with worry about deceit or abandonment.

    An outstanding write and brilliant idea Frank!

    I much enjoyed this one!! Bravo!
    | Posted on 2011-03-05 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      The photo goes perfectly with the poem....
    that tree certainly looks like something one would find in an enchanted forest.

    And it appears that you've sent a few folks off into the shadowland under the canopy to look for your (mythical?) (magical?) tree!


    I hope they've brought bread-crumbs....


    | Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      Gosh Frank , this is positively mystical and surreal . If I ever find another woman I'm going to take her there to dream of spiritual union . Peace .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this Frank. it makes me want to go and find this forest where the tree stands. i like how it is this whimsical peice like a place that you want to take out of your dream land and put it in your back yard so you can always have it close. i dunno i just love the piece though. thanks for sharing but for once i have run out of things to say lol take care ....Joy
    | Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      Makes me want to go looking for the tree in forest deep...

    Love it! :D

    I wish I could find the words to describe my feelings on this poem accurately... It stirs something in me though...
    | Posted on 2011-03-03 00:00:00 | by ShadowsnLights | [ Reply to This ]


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