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    dots Submission Name: Becoming a Mother dots
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    Author: Bloodlust86
    ASL Info:    24/F/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 56/49/53
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    I gave you a name,I gave you life,I felt you move inside me long before I saw your face, I waited so long to hold you in my arms,to look into your eyes and say that you are mine, Forever are you mine, Never am I letting you get ripped away,I don't think I could live any longer if I lost the one thing I gave life to.




    Submitted on 2011-03-03 17:00:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      OMG! This seems like whoever wrote this is either my mom ot sister. This is like the story of their life. I liked this poem.
    | Posted on 2011-03-07 00:00:00 | by DiNoDaNeH | [ Reply to This ]


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