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    dots Submission Name: Love youdots
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    Author: ShadowsnLights
    ASL Info:    25 f canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 71/107/66
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 494
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 470



    Description:
       To the Thief of my heart...
    May we never be apart...


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLove youdots
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    Giving it my all,
    deeper and deeper I fall.

    Holding you, kissing you,
    touching you, loving you.

    As I smell the roses,
    the dark door in me closes.

    As I turn towards you,
    you say "Come here, I'll hold you".

    As you enfold me in you arms,
    something in me warms.

    Love can only make me lighter,
    I think as I hold you tighter.




    Submitted on 2011-03-03 18:29:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Once again breathtaking! it should be put to music... then it may kill people with pleasure.
    | Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      A lovely ode to love. Again good rhyme and the meteor is spot on.

    Frank .
    | Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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