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    dots Submission Name: My Greatest Treasuredots
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    Author: ShadowsnLights
    ASL Info:    25 f canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 71/107/66
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMy Greatest Treasuredots
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    If life hadn't taken the turns that it did..
    If I hadn't reached out when a friend said "Let's go!"..
    If the sum of all my fears and tears hadn't carried me this far..
    If I had stayed and never moved forward in my journey..
    If I hadn't decided on cutting off all the roots that kept me grounded..
    If I had sat there and thought about all the what-ifs and doubts..
    I would have never gained my Greatest Treasure..

    You..




    Submitted on 2011-03-03 19:30:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Twisty! it is the inverse of regret. you deserve to be proud of yourself.
    | Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes....life can be all about ifs buts and maybes. A very insightful write from you once again.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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