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    dots Submission Name: Wedots
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    Author: ShadowsnLights
    ASL Info:    25 f canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 71/107/66
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWedots
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    I will never be Them...
    With all my heart, I can only be Me...

    I hope that You can put Them to rest, in Your mind...
    The Me that wants to spend the rest of Her life with You,
    She waits with Open Arms, Open Heart, Open Mind...

    I too, must learn to cast Them out of my thoughts...
    The Ones that Burned Me, Betrayed Me, Hurt Me...

    I was Afraid, always Afraid...
    But something happened...

    We happened...




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      Its soulful. Your poems (most of them) are not made for comments. They are made for admiration. Dont mind, i want to worship the poet inside you. you are a glimpse of greatness... please reveal yourself in your full glory.

    i'll always be reading you. because you are the universal poet hidden in so many poets and the one who is speaking here is the universal admirer of purity and beauty. you'll find me in many guises. please continue the poetic journey and never believe in any critic who is indifferent or simply ignorant... who is unable to perceive the beauty in your art.
    | Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      i hear this one...

    even when we find that one person who won't let us down, won't leave, won't hurt us...after so much heartbreak, it is so hard to trust...

    been there, done that.

    where the other person has said to me..."i am not her"
    or i have said

    "i am not him"

    trust is a bridge that once destroyed is so hard to rebuild.
    | Posted on 2011-03-05 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Our pasts are very good at haunting us....if we allow it to. Yet another really good write from you.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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