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    dots Submission Name: Knowledge and Faithdots
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    Author: Silencer
    ASL Info:    25/m/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 52/66/29
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Story/Religious
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    dotsKnowledge and Faithdots
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    How could you think it's all random like this?
    Are you so thick as to think His laws don't exist?
    We get all this and you act like that!
    An ignorant child acting like a spoiled brad!
    Can you really not see?
    I say to you look at this beautiful creation in front of me.
    How could it be that this is a mistake?
    How could you conceive my leather bound book is fake?
    You protest dear John man created life in a sheep.
    Are you so thick to see a creation of man instead of a forgery of the masterpiece they reap?
    But the amino acids created in the lab point only to a scientific solution of life.
    Let me explain this so you will know it like the sharp end of a knife.
    God created man and the heavens and the Earth.
    Sure I've been taught this since birth.
    But dig a little deeper and you'll see.
    There's more here than you and me.
    I'll take this life and destroy it in the control.
    Now it goes into sterilization to reach my goal.
    Now let me explain something with a little grace.
    All the ingredients of life are in this place.
    Ponder now on this theme.
    How long will we wait until life will once more gleam?
    It is that easy I hope you understand.
    The Lord once gave life to pass to us all just as He planned.




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