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    dots Submission Name: Why do I try?dots
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    Author: alyssafrench16
    ASL Info:    17/f/inherroomville
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 8/22/19
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWhy do I try?dots
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    Why oh why,
    do I even try,
    to please you now?

    It will never work,
    and just leads to hurt,
    why oh why
    do I even try?

    My faith is dying,
    my eyes are crying,
    and I don't know how long,
    I'll let this go on.




    Submitted on 2011-03-06 13:25:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've done this song and dance many times before and I won't say it will get better because that's the one thing I never wanted to hear. Maybe this person will see the light, maybe not, but one thing is certain: you're better than that.
    | Posted on 2011-03-09 00:00:00 | by TheInvisible | [ Reply to This ]


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