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    dots Submission Name: Never Been Broken-Hearteddots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       Little something I came up as I wrote down my thoughts.


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    dotsNever Been Broken-Hearteddots
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    Love is a deep word,
    Yet deeper in context to understand
    When someone's heart has been torn,
    It means that they have loved to an extent.

    Many times I pictured myself in love,
    Lost in the beauty of perfection
    Even though my experience ended in a sob,
    I drowned in tears that brought me pleasure.

    Growing old and having failed,
    I don't want love to end like that
    Perhaps love has not perforated my shell,
    Since my heart is still in tact.




    Submitted on 2011-03-08 00:03:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      just cause it didnt work out doesnt mean that love was a failure. it just means that person wasnt meant to be with you. but to love someone is the greatest gift you'll ever know, not a failure. good write though, and i hope you can find someone to love oneday
    | Posted on 2011-03-08 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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