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    dots Submission Name: Human Knows Not Humandots
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    Author: coloredstone
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 99/60/37
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 543
    Average Vote:    2.5000
    Bytes: 875



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       A bit of an angst? Topic was too deep for my tot of a brain, buster! I'll keep working on it though :)


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    dotsHuman Knows Not Humandots
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    What a thing is man!
    I cannot think, or I think too much,
    Of what might be said of human nature--
    It's strengths, its weakness, as if it were
    A being on its own.

    It's all the work of Satan--
    The downfall of man that is.
    When his bones crack or his heart breaks
    And he lets himself be blown away
    The devil stands and laughs.

    Human strength is only achieved
    Through prayer, prayer is only sustained
    By trust, trust is only inspired
    Through belief, belief is only gifted,
    By the One who Watches from up above.

    Then let bones crumble into dust,
    Let oppressors make brain juice sodas
    Let them ruin themselves by ruining others
    He who has Promised to answer justly
    Shall surely put things right in the end.




    Submitted on 2011-03-08 11:41:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love it.. the "brain juice sodas" is too graphic for my measly thought lolz.
    The write is awesome though. Much to be learned from it.

    Fana
    i think imma come bake to it soon
    | Posted on 2011-03-17 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      Ironically my blog recently posted "I am human, therefore nothing human is strange to me" in appreciation of the poem entitled Aishah Shechinah By Robert Stephen Hawker (18031875). My case in using that was for God having been born human, knows what it is to be human.

    There is a lot of truth in your work here. It is also nice to see someone take a stand towards right thinking.

    Human strength is only achieved
    Through prayer, prayer is only sustained
    By trust, trust is only inspired
    Through belief, belief is only gifted,
    By the One who Watches from up above.

    Towering words indeed. The above lines are suitable as a mantra (towards oneself) although anyone who believes it needs no such mantra. Most people do not understand that belief really is only found if gifted by the ONE. That said, it has forever been a gift that is free for the asking.

    Very nice.
    | Posted on 2011-03-08 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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