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    dots Submission Name: The Nightdots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 54/139/173
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 339
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsThe Nightdots
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    Calming and soothing.
    The wind cascading upon your skin.
    The stars alight.
    The moon and its wicked grin.

    The night and its dreams.
    The nocturnal pleasures.
    For safety and warmth.
    And all they're darkly treasures.

    Gentle and subtle.
    The essence of night.
    A moment of grace.
    It felt so right.




    Submitted on 2011-03-08 23:29:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      a very nice piece.
    | Posted on 2011-03-09 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful.
    | Posted on 2011-03-09 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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