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    dots Submission Name: What are we?dots
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    Author: ShadowsnLights
    ASL Info:    25 f canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 71/107/66
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       The humanity we are surrounded with...

    If we can call ourselves human...


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    dotsWhat are we?dots
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    Day by day,
    The dreary cattle.

    Day by day,
    They lived in battle.

    Night by night,
    They faced their fears.

    Night by night,
    They shed their tears.




    Submitted on 2011-03-09 01:34:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The thing about humanity that has it so messed up is the way people treat others, negatively.
    There is a cycle towards ignorance.
    Ignorance of human beings makes other human beings not have faith in humanity to a serious degree.

    When a person does something wrong to another anger can come to the victim sorta say.
    Wrongness done to an individual breeds and is a catalyst that can cause great damage, mainly violence.
    Humanity is also sad because there are people who want total control over certain things globally, leaving many important things of human kind by the waste side.Not to forget money itself.

    Children in the Congo or people robbed of shelter taken from them by the system that is suppose to be there to help them and support, referring to homeowners and starving children.
    Hmmm.

    Eight little lines that send off sirens at a big thinking level about the entire planet where people have a struggle to give up or go on with having faith that most of us here will be good human beings coming from learning what really matters and that we all play a great deal of it.
    | Posted on 2011-03-11 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      Humanity is sad but who has turned them into cattle... themselves. Who else!!!

    (Hello dear sheep! Go check the mirror) this is my advice to these cattle. you chose a very appropriate word for them.
    | Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW is all I can really say to this. Every time I read one of your pieces I'm blown out of the water!!!
    | Posted on 2011-03-09 00:00:00 | by TheInvisible | [ Reply to This ]


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